The cosmos dances on my palm
The Universe sparks into being
Galaxies spinning, slow and calm
For him I can hear three bells ring
The Universe sparks into being
The story of a lonely man
For him I can hear three bells ring
I had much greater ambition
The story of a lonely man
They said I needed hard labour
I had much greater ambition
Though there was peace I could savour
They said I needed hard labour
The king threw me to his blacksmiths
Though there was peace I could savour
They couldn’t purify my myths
The king threw me to his blacksmiths
They hammered me for three decades
They couldn’t purify my myths
I was jailed by the Ace of Spades
They hammered me for three decades
I’m all squashed and bent out of shape
I was jailed by the Ace of Spades
But I’ve found a way to escape
I’m all squashed and bent out of shape
I’m abandoned in a black hole
But I’ve found a way to escape
A primal cry comes from my soul
I’m abandoned in a black hole
Galaxies spinning, slow and calm
A primal cry comes from my soul
The cosmos dances on my palm
(This week’s POW, Punam, for the W3 challenge hosted by David on the Skeptic’s Kaddish, she has asked us to write a pantoum on the theme of abandonment. I wrote this backwards… seemed easier.)
“…….and then, behold, I saw a great light….”
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For us mortal humans, the shadow is darkest in the light. The greater the light the worse it is, but that’s part of the journey I guess. Being stagnant and feeling trapped Is the worst thing that could happen to a person, a situation that I currently find myself in. Wonderful how that short phrase of yours conjured up so many thoughts. Thanks, Charlie 😁
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so very nicely done.
grand, Tanmay 🤍
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Thank you, Destiny 😁
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always a pleasure 🤍
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A beautiful creation Tanmay
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Thank you, Angela 😁
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Love the perspective you’ve applied here, Tanmay. Very nice
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Thank you so much 😄
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Well done!
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Thank you, Liam 😁
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Beautiful pantoum!
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Thank you so much 😊
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this is a great pantoum! I loved reading it!
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Thank you 😊
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Thank you Tanmay! I now know what a pantoum is. I think there is a lot skill involved in keeping the train of thought going through this pattern.
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Thank you, Kuria uncle. It wasn’t easy to write, for sure.
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Tanmay, among your many talents, I include: storytelling. This is excellent.
~David
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Thank you, David. Being a story teller has always been my dream 😁
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Tanmay, just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, which is hosted by our brilliant Kerfe, is now live!
Enjoy ❤
Sincerely,
David
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Thank you, David 😊
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I love your take on this prompt Tanmay…it has a very fluid flow.
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Thank you, Michelle 😁
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The story spirals, like the universe, like our galaxy. The end is the beginning. Perfect for a pantoum. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe 😁
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Nicely done!!
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Thank you 😊
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You spun a fabulous tale, Tanmay! It beautifully came full circle..😊
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Thank you, Punam 😁 I have been drawing circles every day, these past few weeks… literally. The pantoum gave me the wonderful opportunity to do this with words.
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Wonderful! This form is all about coming full circle. 😀
You are welcome.
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Unique ❤️
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Thank you, Lesley 😁
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hi, Tanmay ❤
Just wanna let you know that the lovely Aishwarya of 'Kitty's Verses' is our W3 host this week ~
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David 😁
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