Tears on my Hanky

Hey there! On this week’s W3 challenge hosted by David on the Skeptic’s Kaddish, the poet of the week, Michelle , has asked us to write an ode to our handkerchiefs. Here is my attempt.

You were once a fluffy boll of cotton
But then, something magical!
Carded, spun, spooled, warped, slashed, drawn, woven and sent to the mill
Kiered , bleached, mercerised, dyed and cut
And later on, an embroidered chestnut

Desdemona’s tears stain your fair face
Oh, how I wish I could wipe them away
I wish I could wipe out her every trace
But the stains of our pain still stay
How can I be in love with a symbol?

Oh beloved hanky, symbol of fidelity
Symbol of all I’ve loved, all that I’ve lost
Symbol of joy, symbol of pain
Symbol of everything that I crave
Gently caressing my wet cheeks

(I have never written an ode before. I may not have done this right. I did not understand the guidelines for the meter or all that strophe stuff…. Tomorrow will be a month since I started drawing. I want to create something special. Not sure I’ll be able to pull it off.)

23 thoughts on “Tears on my Hanky

  1. This is beautiful Tanmay. The opening verse with a vivid imagery is so brilliant and powerful then you went on to slowly creating a calm vibe in the middle and ending it by saying “Oh beloved hanky, symbol of fidelity
    Symbol of all I’ve loved, all that I’ve lost
    Symbol of joy, symbol of pain
    Symbol of everything that I crave
    Gently caressing my wet cheeks”

    Well done on this👏❤️

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