Hey there! On this week’s W3 challenge hosted by David on the Skeptic’s Kaddish, the poet of the week, Michelle , has asked us to write an ode to our handkerchiefs. Here is my attempt.
You were once a fluffy boll of cotton
But then, something magical!
Carded, spun, spooled, warped, slashed, drawn, woven and sent to the mill
Kiered , bleached, mercerised, dyed and cut
And later on, an embroidered chestnut
Desdemona’s tears stain your fair face
Oh, how I wish I could wipe them away
I wish I could wipe out her every trace
But the stains of our pain still stay
How can I be in love with a symbol?
Oh beloved hanky, symbol of fidelity
Symbol of all I’ve loved, all that I’ve lost
Symbol of joy, symbol of pain
Symbol of everything that I crave
Gently caressing my wet cheeks
(I have never written an ode before. I may not have done this right. I did not understand the guidelines for the meter or all that strophe stuff…. Tomorrow will be a month since I started drawing. I want to create something special. Not sure I’ll be able to pull it off.)
This is beautiful Tanmay. The opening verse with a vivid imagery is so brilliant and powerful then you went on to slowly creating a calm vibe in the middle and ending it by saying “Oh beloved hanky, symbol of fidelity
Symbol of all Iโve loved, all that Iโve lost
Symbol of joy, symbol of pain
Symbol of everything that I crave
Gently caressing my wet cheeks”
Well done on this๐โค๏ธ
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Thank you ๐ I pinched the idea for the first stanza from the song, ‘John Barleycorn Must Die,’ by Traffic, so can’t take all the credit ๐
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Very nicely done, Tanmay ๐ค๐
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Thank you, Destiny ๐
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You welcome๐
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Yes, well done. I like the ending stanza with its repetition and that final line.
Good luck with the drawing!
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Thank you ๐ It looks like I’ll need that luck.
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Wonderfully done, Tanmay! The final stanza is outstanding.
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Thank you, Punam ๐
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My pleasure. ๐
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Great ode ๐
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Thank you ๐
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Aww. Beautiful. So beautiful
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Thank you so much. Drew some inspiration from Shakespeare’s Othello for this.
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You went to a great place to seek inspiration and you sure did the master proud. So beautiful. Standing ovation. Blessing you.
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Thank you and may God bless you, Selma.
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Nice one!!
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Thank you
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Fan-friggin’-tastic, Tanmay ~ I think you did this more than right.
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David
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Thank you, David ๐
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Tanmay ~ I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by our beloved Punam Sharma, is now live:
Enjoy โค
David
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Thank you, David ๐
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*hug*
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